Live ngày 22/10 – Soi lỗi Writing Task 1 sửa đúng gỡ điểm

Dear John,

How are you? I hope you and your family are fine. Many thanks for your last letter. It is great to hear from you again. I have not written for such a long time, I have been really busy going to work. So now I am writing this letter to respond to you with some information about action movies.

Honestly, I love watching action movies because I find it exciting (lưu ý: exciting chỉ tính chất sự vật, excited là cảm xúc con người) and it helps me relax after a long day.

Moreover, I sometimes watch action movies on weekends.

And the most recent action movie that I watched is “Mua do”. It is a famous movie and I find it very interesting.

Well, this is all from me now, friend. I am really looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,

Johnny Pham

Bảng điểm đánh giá chi tiết:

• Task Achievement: 5.5
• Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
• Grammar / Accuracy: 4.5
• Lexical Resource: 5.0

→ Điểm tổng quát (Overall): 5.0 điểm (Viết thư: 3.5/10 quy đổi 1.75/3.5; Viết luận: 6.5/10).

Dear Trang,

I’m very happy to receive your letter, and your brother’s wedding invitation is such a wonderful surprise!

Thank you so much for inviting me to your brother’s wedding. I’m delighted to let you know that I will definitely attend. I’m really looking forward to seeing you soon.

I believe it will be a wonderful and memorable occasion for your family. I’m excited to celebrate this special day with you and meet your family members. Please send my heartfelt congratulations to your brother and his future wife! I will prepare carefully for this special occasion. I can already imagine a romantic setting with lots of flowers, beautiful decorations, and a very happy bride and groom!

I wish the bride and groom a married life full of love, happiness, and understanding. May their marriage always be filled with beautiful memories and endless joy. I hope their wedding day will be everything they have dreamed of.

Once again, thank you for inviting me. I can’t wait to share this special moment with you!

Best wishes,

Mary Leaf

• Ưu điểm: Trả lời trọn vẹn yêu cầu, ngữ pháp chuẩn xác, từ vựng rất tốt (memorable occasion, heartfelt congratulations, romantic setting).
• Điểm lưu ý: Diễn đạt có phần hơi dài và có sự lặp lại cấu trúc câu trong các đoạn chúc phúc.

→ Điểm đánh giá: 6.5 điểm.

Hi David,

It’s great to hear from you! I’m happy to tell you about an important traditional celebration in Vietnam. It is Tet, or Vietnamese Lunar New Year, which is the most important festival in my country.

Before Tet, people clean and decorate their houses, buy new clothes, and prepare traditional food such as banh chung. They also decorate their homes with flowers, especially peach blossoms and yellow apricot blossoms.

During Tet, family members get together, enjoy delicious meals, visit relatives and friends, and give lucky money to children. People also wish each other good health, happiness, and success in the new year.

Tet is very important to Vietnamese people because it is a special time for family reunions and showing respect to our ancestors. It also helps us preserve our traditional culture.

I hope this information is useful for your school project. Write back soon!

Best wishes,

Duc

• Ưu điểm: Trả lời rất tốt đề bài, ngữ pháp có sử dụng từ nối và mệnh đề quan hệ, từ vựng và collocations chủ đề Tết rất chuẩn xác.
• Điểm lưu ý: Ý tưởng hơi thiên về liệt kê, cần đa dạng hóa thêm cấu trúc câu phức.

→ Điểm đánh giá: 7.0 điểm.

Dear Mary,

How are you? I hope you and your family are fine. Many thanks for your last letter. It is great to hear from you again. I haven’t written for such a long time, I have been really busy going to work. So now I am writing this letter to give you some advice.

First of all, I think it would be a good idea to consider your job interview. You should prepare your professional expertise. All of your experiences are things that the judges will value highly.

Secondly, you should choose a position that matches your capabilities and you should have some skills such as communication skill, presentation skill…

Finally, concerning your advice, I would recommend keeping your mind as relaxed as possible. I hope my suggestions are helpful and make it easier for you to make the right decision.

Yours sincerely,

Lyn

Dear Sir,

Thank you for choosing our hotel for your upcoming trip to Ho Chi Minh city. I am writing to answer your questions.

First, I think your travel itinerary is a very good plan. Our hotel is a great choice for you because it is located in the city center. Therefore, it is very convenient and easy for you to travel to famous tourist places.

Secondly, for shopping, I highly recommend you visit Vincom center and Takashimaya. They are big shopping malls near our hotel and they have many famous clothing stores for adults with high-quality products.

Finally, for your children, you can take them to their playground in Suoi Tien Park. It has many fun and safe games for kids. You can also visit the indoor sports center in our hotel.

If you need more information, please let me know. We look forward to welcoming your family.

Best regards,

Hotel manager